Thursday, September 24, 2009

East of Nod

+Wz


Heavy weight on the stomach, crude and distorted.
Light headed and imbalance to the frame.
Eyes dry and head aches pressing behind my ocular orbs.
How much sprinkle went into the form of my green to brown forest?
How much tint to the taint is there on this T to the H to the C?

Ugh is the only sound I want to make.

Ugh

2 comments:

  1. You know, if taken out of context, the sentence - "How much sprinkle went into the form of my green to brown forest?" - is really very surreal. This should go into a poem, and lose just a little bit of its literal, referential meaning. Good line.

    Ugh is the sound I want to make most of the time.

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  2. lol...it was meant as a surreal reflection of the literal meaning.

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